Adam's Blog

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We are who we are,

be your own star.

Its never too late,

to be something great.

Don’t give up your dream,

or you’ll never beam.

When you think its all gone,

keep moving on.

When at the crossroads, just standing dry,

I hope you take the one, less traveled by.

In the end, we’ll have only chance,

Its time to plan our final dance.

Time comes to a stop,

our hearts begin to drop.

The finale is now,

so take your bow.

Now, I wrote this for a project in poetry, and I wanted to post it on my blog. Any helpful(meaning critical or complimentary) comments PLEASE leave one. Take the time to help a writer make his work better in other’s eyes. I know this is a feeling because I wrote it, but I think this is a good poem for it being my first. Hope you all like it!