In class we ready in our text books about a group called the War Hawks. After doing some research on the War Hawks, I think the book did a good job of describing the War Hawks. There was not much I would have added except the fact that most of the War Hawks were Democratic Republicans. I would not change the section much because it does have all the key information such as: they wanted war against British and they believed that the British were trying to suppress the independence of their nation. If I was editor of the book I would not know what to add to make it more interesting. The section if brief because there is not much information besides leaders and what they wanted the key points. As I already said this section has all the key points listed so there is not much to critique besides the missing information such as they were Democratic Republicans.
Heres the picture I would have used in the book
This is John C. Calhoun’s grave, he was one of the leaders of the War Hawks.